Highly recommend for anyone struggling to understand point of view. If you're looking for a concise and practical reference on how to achieve deep point of view, then you'll love Beth Yarnall's easy how-to guide. Have you ever read a book that grabbed you on the first page and pulled you through the whole book almost nonstop to the end? Did you have a difficult time putting it down? Did you lose sleep, miss your train or bus stop or put off work so you could stay in the world the author created? If you answered yes to all or most of the above questions then the author did his or her job. How did he do it? He used deep point of view. Deep POV is achieved when the writer so fully immerses the reader into the character’s head and heart that the writer virtually disappears, drawing the reader deeper into the story. In this book, you'll learn about the different kinds of POV, choosing the right POV for your scene, when, how, and why to shift POV, how to achieve deep point of view, and more. "Terrific book that will up your writing game. I actually went back and editing my ms after reading this book. Highly recommend." ~ Magical Story Fangirl, Amazon "Thanks Beth! I struggled to understand POV and you explained it beautifully. I recommend this to anyone who aspires to be a writer." ~ Lu, Amazon Keywords: novel writing, on writing, write a book, authorship, how to write, writing for beginners, creative writing, writing and editing, fiction writing, playwright, screenwriting, poetry writing, writing reference, language arts, composition, writing, novel writing, reference, research & publishing guides, writing skills, education & reference, short reads, words, writing & grammar, description, describe

Perfect for beginners needing the basics AND seasoned writers looking to dramatically improve their skills. If you’re looking for a concise and practical reference on writing description, deep POV, and sex and romance, then you'll love Beth Yarnall's easy how-to guides. MAKING DESCRIPTION WORK HARD FOR YOU Learn how to use description to achieve deep point of view and to create stories and characters readers will remember long after the last page is turned. GOING DEEP INTO DEEP POINT OF VIEW In this book, you'll learn about the different kinds of POV, choosing the right POV for your scene, when, how, and why to shift POV, how to achieve deep point of view, and more. SOME LIKE IT HOT: WRITING SEX AND ROMANCE In this book you’ll learn how to create sexual tension, how to write sex scenes, and how to plot a romance that will have readers staying up until the wee hours to finish and closing your novel on a happy sigh. "Changed the way I write." ~ TG, Amazon "Terrific book that will up your writing game." ~ Magical Story Fangirl, Amazon Keywords: novel writing, on writing, write a book, authorship, how to write, writing for beginners, creative writing, writing and editing, fiction writing, playwright, screenwriting, poetry writing, writing reference, language arts, composition, writing, novel writing, reference, research & publishing guides, writing skills, education & reference, short reads, words, writing & grammar, description, describe, point of view, POV, deep point of view, deep pov, writing romance, how to write, sex scenes, love scenes

As a writer, you can provide a richer emotional experience for your reader by utilizing a deeper point of view. Deep point of view draws the reader into the characters’ heads and can elicit a stronger emotional reader response to the characters’ struggles, decisions, and reactions to external conflict. Readers who have read a passage in deep point of view often talk about how the characters seemed more vivid, how the story and prose riveted them to the page. It is very easy for a writer to learn ways to draw the reader into the mind, body, and soul of your characters through deep point of view techniques. By the end of the worksheet you’ll have: 1) A basic understanding of different points of view so you can decide if deep or shallow point of view is best for your story 2) Ways to strengthen the emotional writing and draw the reader deeper into the character’s point of view 3) An understanding of the structural elements of a scene to help you know when and how to add deep-POV emotions 4) Tips for how to tweak wording in order to deepen point of view on a minute level, which contributes to a richer point of view for the manuscript as a whole 5) A finely honed radar for spotting “Telling” and shallow POV through exercises This worksheet consists of lessons, homework, and fun exercises for you to see lots of deep and shallow POV examples. You’ll learn lots of simple techniques to help you deepen your character’s point of view.

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Do you want readers to be so caught up in your book that they forget they're reading?Then you need deep POV.Deep POV takes the reader and places them inside of our characters--hearing their thoughts, feeling their emotions, and living the story through them. Compared to other writing styles, it builds a stronger emotional connection between the reader and our characters, creates the feeling of a faster pace, and helps avoid point-of-view errors and telling rather than showing.In Deep Point of View, writing instructor and fiction editor Marcy Kennedy brings her years of experience into showing you how to write deep POV. You'll learn specific, practical things you can do immediately to take your fiction to the next level.Each book in the Busy Writer's Guide series is intended to give you enough theory so that you can understand why things work and why they don't, but also enough examples to see how that theory looks in practice. In addition, they provide tips and exercises to help you take it to the pages of your own story, with an editor's-eye view. Most importantly, they cut the fluff so that you have more time to write and to live your life.

'What can I say, except I REALLY BLOODY ENJOYED THIS!!!!' ~ Sheryl ~ Confessions From Romancaholics Yarnall’s Dangerous Lines series delivers can't-put-down action, passionate romance, and fast-paced thrills in one-click. Cal and Lucy’s journey continues…. The fly to Cal Sellers’s spider, I’ve been caught in his web. A trap of my own making. And now he’s wooing me. Who is this man who looks like Cal, sounds like Cal, and makes me forget my own name like Cal? Why is this fake marriage starting to feel real? Where am I going to find the strength to resist when all I want to do is give in? I should’ve known it. Cal’s up to his old tricks again only the price this time isn’t just my heart. It’s my soul. '...characters that felt real and that shared a true love and affection for one another.' ~ Jen, Bookaholics Not So Anonymous “I can't even begin to express how much I loved this novel. It was the first book that I have read by Beth Yarnall, but I will be keeping an eye out for her books in the future.” ~ Rhiannon, Goodreads reader 'With a little stalker in the mix this book was a fun read.' ~ Heather ~ A Crazy Vermonter's Book Reviews * * * * * Author's Note: This book was previously published under the title LUSH. It’s been revised and republished as a duet—REAL and FAKE—for new readers. Keywords: suspense, action adventure, thriller, romance, secret, covert, contemporary, bodyguard, protector, bad boy, alpha hero, secret baby, marriage of convenience, fake marriage, fake wedding, fake husband, fake wife, series, billionaire, romantic suspense, Beth Yarnell, series, mystery, alpha male

'What can I say, except I REALLY BLOODY ENJOYED THIS!!!!' ~ Sheryl ~ Confessions From Romancaholics Yarnall’s Dangerous Lines series delivers heart-stopping suspense, passionate romance, and fast-paced thrills. Three full-length, binge-worthy novels in one-click. LOST She must learn to trust the very hot former Navy SEAL assigned to guard her or one of them could lose their life. FAKE She hates him. He broke her heart. Now he's back, offering a fake marriage and her only way out. URGE Winner of the 2016 Daphne du Maurier Award of Excellence in Mystery/Suspense in the paranormal category He mocked her in high school. Now he’s the only one standing between her and a murderer.

“I thoroughly enjoyed this read and would recommend it to any of my paranormal romance fans!” ~ Liz, Crazies R Us book blog Winner of the 2016 Daphne du Maurier Award of Excellence in Mystery/Suspense in the paranormal category Graham and Erin’s journey continues…. Everything is spinning out of control. Including my abilities. The crime rate is soaring. People are dying in a small town that hasn’t had a suspicious death since 1921. And now Graham and I are sure that same killer is after me. He or she has already taken out my dad and my aunt by somehow trapping them within their own minds. He’s powerful. So powerful that he controls my ability to find out who he really is. The clock is ticking and I’m running out of time to save everyone I love from a murderer who can kill with his mind. “I really enjoyed the story, and while I did guess the killer, I didn't guess who it was until the chapter before it was revealed. I read a lot of mysteries and I'm usually pretty good at figuring out whodunnit. That this one had me baffled for that long says a lot for it.” ~ Laurel, Goodreads reader “The last 20% were so exciting I just couldn’t believe it. The whole book was exciting but the finale was wonderful. I couldn’t turn the pages fast enough.” ~ Trish, Goodreads reader * * * * * Author's Note: This book was previously published under the title A DEEP AND DARK DECEMBER. It’s been revised and republished as a duet—URGE and RARE—for new readers. Keywords: suspense, action adventure, thriller, romance, secret, covert, contemporary, bodyguard, protector, bad boy, alpha male hero, military, series, billionaire, romantic suspense, mystery, Beth Yarnell, romance, small town, paranormal, psychic, series, mystery, alpha male, bodyguard, supernatural, power, ability, mind control, read minds, power of suggestion

Stay up way past your bedtime. Call in sick to work. You’re not going to be able to put this book down. Yarnall’s Dangerous Lines series delivers can't-put-down action, passionate romance, and fast-paced thrills in one-click. Lucas and Mi’s journey continues…. My friend is dead because a madman is after me and he’ll stop at nothing to own me. I’m beginning to trust Lucas Vega, the very hot former SEAL who’s been doing a whole lot more to my body than guarding it. On the run, with very few options left, the pressure grows until I’m forced to finally tell my secret and risk losing Lucas forever. Times up. He found me. “Can I just say that this book surprised me? In a super awesome heart-pounding, heart wrenching, turn the page faster kind of way.” ~ Kati, Romancing Rakes for the Love of Romance “Yarnall has created sympathetic characters in a hard-to-put-down book that makes the reader rush to find the Happily-Ever-After.” ~ author Peggy Bird “I went into this with absolutely zero expectations, except that it sounded intriguing and had a pretty cover... but WOW. Love, love, loved it. I've sat here all night neglecting everything to blow through it, and it was so entertaining!” ~ Alix, Goodreads reader * * * * * Author's Note: This book was previously published under the title RUSH. It’s been revised and republished as a duet—LOST and SAVED—for new readers. Keywords: suspense, action adventure, thriller, romance, secret, covert, contemporary, bodyguard, protector, bad boy, interracial multicultural, alpha hero, military, series, billionaire, romantic suspense, mystery, Beth Yarnell, romance, series, mystery, alpha male

★Nominated for the Romance Writers of America Rita® award★ Beau: Six years. That’s how long I spent behind bars for a crime I didn’t commit—the brutal murder of the woman I loved. Now I’m free, but life on the outside is a different kind of prison. I don’t know who I am or who I want to be. I don’t have a job, a home or even a driver’s license. At least I have my sister, Cora. She never stopped believing in me. She even got me a job at the private investigation agency that cleared my name. And then Vera Swain walks into Nash Security and Investigations and kicks my world on its ass. Vera: There’s only one thing that would make me come out of hiding after two years on the run—finding my sister. I made the mistake of telling a monster about her. The same monster who beat me and broke me. To save us both, I’m forced to confide in Beau Hollis of Nash Security and Investigations. He looks at me like he knows me—the real me. He sees too much, makes me feel too much. The pleasure he offers is exciting and addictive. But I can’t fall for him…because my love could get us both killed. ***Praise for Atone*** 'Atone was heart-wrenching but beautiful.' ~ Tracy, Book Binge 'Atone was a good combination of all the things I enjoy in a read, romance, a dash of suspense and a good hit to the feels.' ~ Shannan, Wicked Reads 'Great read for those who like suspense and hot romance!' ~ Holly, It's About the Book 'I enjoyed this story, something different you don't read all the time.' ~ Katie, Nerdy, Dirty, and Flirty